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what do you think please answer!! (10 points 4 honest answer)?
this is a poem i wrote called:nature seeking for you
it is green day,
in the nature,
trees, mountains,and lakes,
loving the way how you sing to them,
and how you play your guitar,
it is another green day,
the trees,mountings,and lakes,
eager to hear your sound singing,
But you didn’t appeared,
not that day or the next or the after!,
nature became no more mature,
trees started to wither,
there are no more fountains in the mountains ,
Lakes dried up,
Why?!,
because your singing that made them alive,
you are there water,
did you have to go!,
Because i loved the Scene, which is my room overlooking it,
and breathtaking,
i heard the news.
i couldn’t believe it,
you were the nature’s water,
and i am never going to see that scene again,
now i know why the nature is so sad,
Because the person who cares about her is no bad.!
so what do you think i wrote it in like 5 min.and beside english is my 2nd language so please be honest!thanks
a few grammatical errors but its a nice poem… Let me correct a few of them for you 
…and make a few suggestions that i think would go great with it just to give you an idea…
it is A green day
in the Nature.
Trees, mountains, and lakes,
loving the way how you sing to them
and how you play your guitar.
It is another green day
The trees, mountings, and lakes WAIT
eagerLY to hear your sound singing.
But you didn’t appear.
Not that day or the next or the ONE after!
Nature became no LONGER Nature.
ITS trees started to wither.
There WERE no more fountains in the mountains.
ITS lakes dried up.
Why?!
IT HAD BEEN your singing that made them alive AND
MOTHERLY CARESSES THAT MADE THEM GROW.
WHY did you have to go?
I loved the BREATHTAKING scene my room OVERLOOKS
IN WHICH NOW LIFE FORSOOK.
You ONCE were the Nature’s water
AND WHAT MADE IT COME ALIVE.
Now I know why Nature is sad.
SO PLEASE COME BACK AND SHARE YOUR LOVE,
OR AT LEAST JUST A TAD.
*** I think I got carried away hehe..hope this helps
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